Rough Cut

Here is the rough cut of our sequence created from the footage in the practise shoot.



After the rough cut there are some things that I and even group members think need to change:

• The mums message is too long and needs to be cut much shorter. The script for it also needs to change, she can't just ramble on but needs to be calling for a good reason.
• The messages don't sound as if they were coming from the machine, the sound effects weren't effective enough.
• I think that Patricia would stand as a better actress than Bianca and would look the part more. I also think that the friends voice should change and that someone different who can portray more fear over the message should be the voice.